week 6 new version&critques
After meeting the tutor on Monday, I decided to use a sankey diagram rather than the network diagram.
Feedback from the tutor:
1.The cover is not attractive (and does not make sence)
2.The graph is better than the last one, but it can still be better. The graph does not match the data exactly and it did not immidiately show the fact of dropping down in the first place.
3.There are some typographic issue on it suck as overlap of the text and the graph.
The graph below is the possible modified version my tutor sketched.
The picture is the possible modification of the cover
Feedback from the tutor:
1.The cover is not attractive (and does not make sence)
2.The graph is better than the last one, but it can still be better. The graph does not match the data exactly and it did not immidiately show the fact of dropping down in the first place.
3.There are some typographic issue on it suck as overlap of the text and the graph.
The graph below is the possible modified version my tutor sketched.
The picture is the possible modification of the cover
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