Feedback: I need to be more consistent in my style and communication. Adjestment based on the feedback. cover&backcover page 1,2 Page 3,4 Page 5,6 Page 7,8 Page 9,10
From the feedback this week. I need to mock up the booklet again. My tutor advises that i should add a page with a quote so that the "story" goes smoothly.
Most of the drawing do not tell the story. The image should conclude information. It looks like a story book instead. My tutor advices that i should mock up the booklet again.