Week 3
I have a presentation on Thursday this week. My graph compares the number of sheep and people in New Zealand in 2 decades.
The draft above
My tutor suggested that my graph needs more development. The comparison of the two population shows not enough information.
After the presentation, I decide to create a graph to descirbe the numbers of sheep, cow, and beef cattles. My previous research shows the reason why the number of sheep decrease, a graph to show the relationship among different cattles is more reasonable in term of my research.
The draft above
My tutor suggested that my graph needs more development. The comparison of the two population shows not enough information.
After the presentation, I decide to create a graph to descirbe the numbers of sheep, cow, and beef cattles. My previous research shows the reason why the number of sheep decrease, a graph to show the relationship among different cattles is more reasonable in term of my research.
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